Bassim
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- Mar 1, 2008
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- Bosnian
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- Bosnia Herzegovina
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- Sweden
I wanted to use "a smile crept across" in my sentence. The second sentence came as an association after the first. Would you please correct my mistakes?
John saw his grandchild scampering towards him, and a smile crept across his wrinkled face. "Mummy sent me to ask you if you could lent us some money to tide us over until the end of the month," the girl asked, blinking her blue eyes. His face turned dark as he fumbled for his wallet.
John saw his grandchild scampering towards him, and a smile crept across his wrinkled face. "Mummy sent me to ask you if you could lent us some money to tide us over until the end of the month," the girl asked, blinking her blue eyes. His face turned dark as he fumbled for his wallet.