could you correct my writing?

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I study English as asecond language,and I hope to improve my skills special writing skills because I am very bad:cry:

So Iwrite small essay and I want every one correct It:roll:


Friends like sun shine in my life.They make my life has meaning.They help me when I need something.Also, when I sad they stop beside me.

I love my friends so much.Always I feel happy with them.Really, I can't express my feelings for them.I want to being with them all my time.

 
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