"What are your reasons..."

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Bassim

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Dear teachers,
This sentence is from my own short story. Please would you take a look at it and tell me if I have punctuated it correctly.

1. "What are your reasons for applying for asylum?" asked me a middle-aged interviewer, who, judging by his paunch and red bloated face, enjoyed good food and drink.
 

Gillnetter

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Dear teachers,
This sentence is from my own short story. Please would you take a look at it and tell me if I have punctuated it correctly.

1. "What are your reasons for applying for asylum?" [STRIKE]asked me [/STRIKE]a middle-aged interviewer (asked me) , who, judging by his paunch and red bloated face, enjoyed good food and drink.
Gil
 
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