englishhobby
Key Member
- Joined
- Jun 19, 2009
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Russian Federation
- Current Location
- Russian Federation
My family has ___ not so large, but comfortable, ___ well-planned flat in the centre of the city. - This is a typical example of sentences my students sometimes make. I know this sentence sounds unnatural and there's an article and a conjunction missing, but if I just put in an article, it won't solve the problem, as the setence will sound awkward anyway. I could rephrase it to sound better:
My family has a medium-sized house located in the city center which is comfortable and well planned.
The problem is that I want to correct my student's sentence with "minimal" changes, if you know what I mean. I want to keep almost all the words the student used and the structure of the sentence but put it in a "proper" way. Is it possible?
My family has a medium-sized house located in the city center which is comfortable and well planned.
The problem is that I want to correct my student's sentence with "minimal" changes, if you know what I mean. I want to keep almost all the words the student used and the structure of the sentence but put it in a "proper" way. Is it possible?