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    their concepts have been both approved

    Hi all, The attached is the consolidated slides of the campaigns that their concepts have been both approved by you and your manager. I am sending an email and I think that using "their concept" in this context is not correct. Could you kindly edit it for me
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    Reviving Campaign

    We witness continued declines in sales. We would like to make a campaign to revive the number or increase the number of sales once again. Can I name this campaign as a (Reviving Campaign). If not, what would be your suggestions
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    within the allocated budget

    Hi all, I appreciate your kind support regarding the below e-mail. "In principle, we will work together in this campaign but hopefully the proposal from your side will be within the allocated budget of this campaign. appreciate your kind support regarding the below e-mail. "In principle, we...
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    [General] "led to unfulfillement in upselling the new offer"

    Hi all, I would like to say that the agent in customer care didn't notice the flag on the system which led to a failure in upselling the new offer. I see "failure" is unprofessional in this context. Can I say the following instead: "led to unfulfillement in upselling the new offer"
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    [General] Reminder of the target

    Hi all, I appreciate your help regarding the below e-mail. "we would like to remind ourselves and you with our targets until the end of year and we also wanted to ensure you're putting with us in the picture and that we all follow where we are from our targets and following the progress/drop...
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    [General] Thanks for your readiness to cooperate

    Hi all, I appreciate your help regarding editing the below e-mail. "Thanks for your readiness to cooperate and your team with us. As agreed there are two types of requests: 1- Requests that needs complicated work from your side until they are done and this will be shared with you in a...
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    [General] Surely we should be prepared for something by this occasion

    Hi all, Today is the anniversary of the company that I am working for. One of my colleagues recommended to launch an offer. The offer to be launched takes too much time. Can you edit the following e-mail: "Surely we should be prepared for something by this occasion but maybe because we are...
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    [General] hold back in supporting me

    "I really appreciate you didn't hold back in supporting me when Mohamed asked you to do so during your call. I also appreciate that you welcome assigning one of your team members to be fully dedicated for our many required reports within my onboarding period. As Mohamed said and as you...
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    [General] Salary of pensioners

    Hi all, I hope you are keeping well. I appreciate your help regarding the below e-mail. "The campaign of transfering salary of pensioners in order to achieve success, it is all about being well positioned focusing on the values especially as this segment has increased sensitivity to values...
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    [General] Increasing my Offer

    Hi all, I sent to my prospective employer to negotiate the received job offer. They replied in a strict way that they can't increase my offer and that they are awaiting for my final feedback tomorrow. I would like to send them the following to wonder why they at least didn't open a room for...
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    The Final Job Offer

    Hi all, I hope you are keeping well. I have finally received the job offer. I have some concerns about it that I mentioned in my below e-mail on which I appreciate your help 🙂 " I initially welcome and convinced with your proposed offer and I am ambitious to join and provide the company with...
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    [General] Advisor/Consultant

    Hi all, I am sending an email to my prospective employer to change my title to be consultant as discussed. I am worried to show that what I am writing is rude or trivial. I am suggesting to write the below options. Please let me know which one works better? If any of them works better, please...
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    [General] reached an agreement/ reached a satisfactory solution

    My prospective employer has recently downgraded my title from a senior manager to manager. I had a discussion with my prospective manager to negotiate with HR to keep the title unchanged or to offer me a similar senior role equivalent to senior manager. I would like to follow up with him now...
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    [General] Downwarding My Job Title

    Hi all, I appreciate your help regarding the below e-mail. "I appreciate your support and push to get the process moving ahead regarding my offer. The HR has explained the situation for me and that my prospective title is going to be downgraded to manager instead of being senior manager and...
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    [General] Message to GM

    As I shared earlier, I reached the offer stage for one of the jobs that I have applied for recently. I have gone through all the assessment, providing them with a presentation, and have been accepted for the first and second interviews. The offer is still stuck with HR for approval. It took too...
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    [General] The matter took too much time

    Hi all, I am awaiting for HR feedback on a job offer. I would like to say to them that it took too much time and still no feedback. At the same time I want to be professional. Can I say the following: Option1: "The matter took too much time and still no news, I hope nothing is wrong." Option...
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    [General] If the offer is stuck

    I applied for a job and I reached the offer stage. I checked with HR if the offer is ready so that I can submit my notice to my current employer. I would like to ask HR if the offer needs a push from my upcoming manager to get the things moving forward. Can I use the below bold part or do you...
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    [General] Assessment Feedback

    Hi all, I appreciate your kind help regarding the below. The recruitment supervisor that has arranged for an interview for me is ignoring my recent messages of checking on the feedback on my assessment. I would like to tell her manager tactfully that it is unprofessional to ignoring the...
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    [General] Our Long Call

    Hello all, I appreciate your help regarding the below e-mail. "In our long call, we agreed on things and we had different point of view regarding other things and it end up without bringing my talent to the bank. Although we previously had different point of views, I think now we will agree...
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    [General] High Calibre

    Hi all, I appreciate your help regarding the below e-mail. I am going to send it to a CEO that I don't know personally. "I of course respect your decision whether or not I join the bank. But in business world, sometimes we know the value of things after some time. It might come a day in...
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