Raharu
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- Feb 27, 2012
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- English
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- United States
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- United States
I think I have a interesting question, since google couldn't handle it. I'm trying to proof read a story, and this sentence doesn't sound right to me, "Her back lay propped against a fruitless tree."
The two verbs "lay" and "propped" sound weird together, but at the same time they kind of don't. The narrative of the story is third person pas tense, so I know that it should be "laid".
I think the root of the problem is that the author is using "propped" as an adjective when it's not.
How would you guys correct this sentence? If at all...
Thanks for your help!
The two verbs "lay" and "propped" sound weird together, but at the same time they kind of don't. The narrative of the story is third person pas tense, so I know that it should be "laid".
I think the root of the problem is that the author is using "propped" as an adjective when it's not.
How would you guys correct this sentence? If at all...
Thanks for your help!