AllaR
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I wrote some texts. Are there any mistakes?. Can anyone check, please
1) She is a joyous person. She can be very active and energetic. Sometimes her friends say that she is a girl of moods and quite impulsive. But that’s only because she is a very ambitious girl and she can be irritable sometimes when she can’t get what she wants.
2) Her friends love her because she is the life and soul of the party. Her mum loves her because she is even-tempered and calm. Her boyfriend loves her because she is friendly and positive. Her teacher loves her because she is a very creative and curious girl.
3) I don’t think that you will ever find a person who is so good-hearted, peaceful and reliable. Some people can say that he is non-communicative and reserved. Well, maybe he is from time to time. But it’s a good thing. He is very paitient and well-balanced. Maybe he can be too quiet sometimes, but compare to his talkative sister he is an equable person.
4) - What do you think about the new girl? Did you like her?
- Yes, I did. She is so harmonious, sensitive and deep. Perhaps a little bit too thin-skinned and restless but she is very acute.
1) She is a joyous person. She can be very active and energetic. Sometimes her friends say that she is a girl of moods and quite impulsive. But that’s only because she is a very ambitious girl and she can be irritable sometimes when she can’t get what she wants.
2) Her friends love her because she is the life and soul of the party. Her mum loves her because she is even-tempered and calm. Her boyfriend loves her because she is friendly and positive. Her teacher loves her because she is a very creative and curious girl.
3) I don’t think that you will ever find a person who is so good-hearted, peaceful and reliable. Some people can say that he is non-communicative and reserved. Well, maybe he is from time to time. But it’s a good thing. He is very paitient and well-balanced. Maybe he can be too quiet sometimes, but compare to his talkative sister he is an equable person.
4) - What do you think about the new girl? Did you like her?
- Yes, I did. She is so harmonious, sensitive and deep. Perhaps a little bit too thin-skinned and restless but she is very acute.
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