Unlike to the other process, low impurity level is achieved with plasma assisted

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I have a question about following sentence. Please make a correction if the sentence is not correct.

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Unlike to the other process method, low impurity level is achieved with plasma assisted method, which attributes to the lowest resistivity.
 

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I have a question about following sentence. Please make a correction if the sentence is not correct.

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Unlike[STRIKE] to [/STRIKE]the other (or "another") process method (or "other process methods"), low impurity level is achieved with a (or "the" if it's the only method) plasma assisted method, which attributes (or "results in") to the lowest resistivity.

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:up: - But you could have an 'a' before 'low'. You could even have 'the impurity level can be reduced by...'. And I would be less gentle about 'which attributes (or "results in") to the lowest resistivity'. I'd simply say 'attributes to' is wrong ... 'contributes to' maybe :-? ... or just 'which gives the lowest resistivity';-)

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