[Grammar] When you have a text with a lot of concepts

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Are the following paragraphs grammatically correct?

When you have a text with a lot of concepts, considering that you have bad memory, I suggest you first make a quick read, to have a first reading of the book. To memorize quickly the concepts, I recommend that you choose the most important concepts, then use the first letters of the four or five most important concepts and create a word you can remember.

Finally you should re-read and understand the concepts, underline the most important part. You should write a summary while studying. I will always be available to answer your questions. I want you read these photocopies, and put in to practice what we have discussed
a word you can remember.

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Nikitus said:

Hello

Are the following paragraphs grammatically correct?

When you have a text with a lot of concepts, considering that you have bad memory, I suggest you first make a quick read, to have a first reading of the book. To memorize quickly the concepts, I recommend that you choose the most important concepts, then use the first letters of the four or five most important concepts and create a word you can remember.

Finally you should re-read and understand the concepts, AND underline the most important part. You should write a summary while studying. I will always be available to answer your questions. I want you read these photocopies, and put in to practice what we have discussed.

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Please note the changes.

Tarheel, did you mean to make some changes to the first long paragraph. Several are necessary but you don't seem to have dealt with them.

Nikitus said:

Hello



When you have a text with a lot of concepts, considering that you have bad memory, I suggest you first make a quick read, to have a first reading of the book. To memorize quickly the concepts, I recommend that you choose the most important concepts, then use the first letters of the four or five most important concepts and create a word you can remember.

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Perhaps:

When you have a text with a lot of concepts, scan through the book, taking note of the main points. Also, make an acronym of the main concepts to make it easier to remember them.