correspondence Letter need to correct

kouzbari · Apr 6, 2021

Dear Sir ,

Greetings from A company , we has known that you are the Market Area manager for B , Our range area is Dermatology and Plastic surgery and we are interested at C Machine .

We would like to ask you if you are looking for distributor in D ?

Appreciate your reply .

Thanks & regards

emsr2d2 · Apr 6, 2021

kouzbari said:
Dear Sir,

[STRIKE]Greetings from A[/STRIKE] I am writing to you on behalf of [company name]. [STRIKE]we has known[/STRIKE] I am aware that you are the Market Area manager for B. Our [STRIKE]range[/STRIKE] area is dermatology and plastic surgery, and we are interested [STRIKE]at[/STRIKE] in [name of machine].

[STRIKE]We[/STRIKE] I would like to ask you if you are looking for a distributor in D?

[STRIKE]Appreciate[/STRIKE] I look forward to your reply.

[STRIKE]Thanks & regards[/STRIKE] Yours faithfully

Your name

Welcome to the forum. :hi:

Please note my corrections above. You need to concentrate on the spacing around punctuation. We do not put a space before a comma, a full stop or a question mark.
What is supposed to go where you have written "B" and "D"?

correspondence Letter need to correct

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