Mehrgan
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- Joined
- Apr 18, 2009
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- Native Language
- Persian
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- Iran
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- Iran
Hi there,
A friend of mine has used, in a writing, a sentence I don't know the best alternative for, as it seems wrong in structure and choice of word. I was wondering if you could kindly help me get it fixed.
'...the overuse of technology has decreased the relationships among people.'
Can anything 'decrease' the 'relationships'?
Is 'relationships' the right choice in this sentence? (As he meant people don't really get to keep in touch, these days - or perhaps the way they get in touch is not as genuine as it used to be, perhaps.)
A friend of mine has used, in a writing, a sentence I don't know the best alternative for, as it seems wrong in structure and choice of word. I was wondering if you could kindly help me get it fixed.
'...the overuse of technology has decreased the relationships among people.'
Can anything 'decrease' the 'relationships'?
Is 'relationships' the right choice in this sentence? (As he meant people don't really get to keep in touch, these days - or perhaps the way they get in touch is not as genuine as it used to be, perhaps.)