[Grammar] Is this phrase correct?

bmachina · Nov 20, 2013

Is this phrase correct?

Creative Armory for Professional Digital Handcrafted Authors.

Thank you in advance

MikeNewYork · Nov 20, 2013

bmachina said:
Is this phrase correct?

Creative Armory for Professional Digital Handcrafted Authors.

Thank you in advance

The phrase seems strange to me. What is it supposed to describe?

bmachina · Nov 20, 2013

MikeNewYork said:
The phrase seems strange to me. What is it supposed to describe?

Hi and thanks for the quick reply.

Im a Designer and this phrase is a tagline from one of my insignia's that im going to release in the market very soon.

Basically i just want to say that inside the package you would find creative content like vectors, shapes, textures, and other designer tools.
This package is for Professional Authors in this business that make this digital shapes and crafts by hand.

Thanks

MikeNewYork · Nov 20, 2013

bmachina said:
Hi and thanks for the quick reply.

Im a Designer and this phrase is a tagline from one of my insignia's that im going to release in the market very soon.

Basically i just want to say that inside the package you would find creative content like vectors, shapes, textures, and other designer tools.
This package is for Professional Authors in this business that make this digital shapes and crafts by hand.

Thanks

I am not familiar with the terminology used in your field, but "Professional Digital Handcrafted Authors" sounds to me as if the authors are "handcrafted".

bmachina · Nov 20, 2013

MikeNewYork said:
The phrase seems strange to me. What is it supposed to describe?

Hi and thanks for the quick reply.

Im a Designer and this phrase is a tagline from one of my insignia's that im going to release in the market very soon.

Basically i just want to say that inside the package you would find creative content like vectors, shapes, textures, and other designer tools.
This package is for Professional Authors in this business that make this digital shapes and crafts by hand.

Thanks

MikeNewYork · Nov 20, 2013

bmachina said:
Hi and thanks for the quick reply.

Im a Designer and this phrase is a tagline from one of my insignia's that im going to release in the market very soon.

Basically i just want to say that inside the package you would find creative content like vectors, shapes, textures, and other designer tools.
This package is for Professional Authors in this business that make this digital shapes and crafts by hand.

Thanks

Yes, you have posted that already.

bmachina · Nov 20, 2013

MikeNewYork said:
I am not familiar with the terminology used in your field, but "Professional Digital Handcrafted Authors" sounds to me as if the authors are "handcrafted".

Exactly! That not sound good to me neither.
Is there name for the person who makes the Crafts? I want to say that Person is as a Digital "Craft Maker" Author?
Something like "Creative Armory for Digital Professionals "Craft Makers"? Theres is no problem to drop the (Author) or something.

Thanks again

MikeNewYork · Nov 20, 2013

bmachina said:
Exactly! That not sound good to me neither.
Is there name for the person who makes the Crafts? I want to say that Person is as a Digital "Craft Maker" Author?
Something like "Creative Armory for Digital Professionals "Craft Makers"? Theres is no problem to drop the (Author) or something.

Thanks again

American Heritage Dictionary lists "handcrafter" as a noun. Does that work for you? Also, is "digital" needed in your title?

Amigos4 · Nov 20, 2013

Welcome to the forum, bmachina! :hi:

Is "Creative Armory" a commonly used label meaning a collection/inventory/supply of professionally designed software? Are you aware that there are several companies that already use "Creative Armory" in their business name?

'Creative Armory for Professional Digital Handcrafted Authors' does nothing to excite me! Is there an alternative title you are considering?

bmachina · Nov 20, 2013

MikeNewYork said:
American Heritage Dictionary lists "handcrafter" as a noun. Does that work for you? Also, is "digital" needed in your title?

Yes "digital" its very important for me.
And something like:
"Creative Armory for Professional Digital handcrafters"?

MikeNewYork · Nov 20, 2013

bmachina said:
Yes "digital" its very important for me.
And something like:
"Creative Armory for Professional Digital handcrafters"?

If that works for you, it works for me. Capitalize "Handcrafters".

bmachina · Nov 20, 2013

MikeNewYork said:
If that works for you, it works for me. Capitalize "Handcrafters".

"Creative Armory (or Content, just dont now yet) for Professional Digital Handcrafters"

Thank you so much MikeNewYork and Amigos4.
Realy apreciate!

Cheers

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