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thomas615

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I want to send email to my manager. Is this sentence correct?

I would like to book an appointment with you preferably end of December so as to discuss my job options. Please let me know what dates you are available.
 

MikeNewYork

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A few changes: "I would like to make an appointment with you, preferably at end of December, to discuss my job options. Please let me know what dates you are available."
 

teechar

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For the first sentence, I would say: I would like to make an appointment with you for around the end of December to discuss my job options.
 
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