javierm5
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Hi, I have written a formal email to my English teacher to make a complaint. I'm not sure if I have made any grammatical mistakes, or if the email can be better expressed or more formal (I want it to be as formal as possible). Can you check it? Thanks a lot!
Dear Ms Grau,
I am writing to complain about school schedule, which I am currently studying at second A levels in Juan Manuel Zafra.
I am in scientific and technological second A levels, and I could explain you this email on behalf of all students in the course. I think we have too many hours for each subject, and if we had less hours of school, we would have more efficiency, such as the document I have attached says. Spain is the country with more school hours and the worst academic results.
Moreover, this year is very hard and stressful, and since we have an exam every day, I can not sleep the hours I need enough at my age. So as I told you, we should not spend so much time on study, and I would be grateful if you could let us start classes at 10 a.m.
Finally, due to which I explained you before, we do not have time for rest, so I wonder if you would convince the teachers for relax the number of exams and homework that they order.
Many thanks for kindly considering my requests; I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely, Javier Moreno Sepena
Dear Ms Grau,
I am writing to complain about school schedule, which I am currently studying at second A levels in Juan Manuel Zafra.
I am in scientific and technological second A levels, and I could explain you this email on behalf of all students in the course. I think we have too many hours for each subject, and if we had less hours of school, we would have more efficiency, such as the document I have attached says. Spain is the country with more school hours and the worst academic results.
Moreover, this year is very hard and stressful, and since we have an exam every day, I can not sleep the hours I need enough at my age. So as I told you, we should not spend so much time on study, and I would be grateful if you could let us start classes at 10 a.m.
Finally, due to which I explained you before, we do not have time for rest, so I wonder if you would convince the teachers for relax the number of exams and homework that they order.
Many thanks for kindly considering my requests; I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely, Javier Moreno Sepena
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