Ashiuhto
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 30, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Please check the following sentences.
Which is better?
Is #3 acceptable?
(1) There, in the showcase were displayed various kinds of robot dogs which came into Jilly's notice.
(2) There, in the showcase were displayed verious kinds of robot dogs which caught Jilly's eye.
(3) There, in the showcase were displayed various kinds of robot dogs which attracted Jilly.
Which is better?
Is #3 acceptable?
(1) There, in the showcase were displayed various kinds of robot dogs which came into Jilly's notice.
(2) There, in the showcase were displayed verious kinds of robot dogs which caught Jilly's eye.
(3) There, in the showcase were displayed various kinds of robot dogs which attracted Jilly.
