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KathyNS

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I've been doing some tests, so I'd appreciate if someone would help me and tell me if these sentences are right.

1. The duties of the secretary are to take (taking) the minutes, mailing the correspondence, and calling the members before meetings.

2. If biennials were planted this year, they will be (would be) likely to bloom next year and every two years thereafter.

3. The value of the dollar declines as the rate of inflation raises (rises).

4. Even if a member has drank (drunk) too mich the night before, the counselors of Alcoholic Anonymous will try to convince him or her to sober up and stop drinking again.

5. Anthropologists assert that many of the early American Plains Indians did not engage in planting crops but to hunt (in hunting), living primarily on buffalo meat.

6. The neutron bomb provides the capable (capability) of a limited nuclear war in which buildings would be preserved, but people would be destroyed.

7. The differential attractions of the sun and the moon have a direct effect in (on) the rising and falling of the tides.

8. Despite of (only Despite) the pills which are available, many people still have trouble sleeping.

9. Before TV, the common man seldom never had the opportunity to see and hear his leaders-express their views.

10. If it receives enough rain at the proper time, hay will grow (as) quickly as grass.

11. Psychology Today is interesting, informative, and it is (only is) easy to read.

12. Before she died, the daughter of Andrew Jackson who lives (lived) in the family mansion used to take tourists through her home.

13. It is essential that the temperature is not (not be) elevated to a point where the substance formed may become unstable and decompose into its constituent elements.

14. Two of the players from the Yankees has (had) been chosen to participate in the All Star game.

15. John Philip Sousa, who (whom) many people consider the greatest composer of marches, wrote his music during the era known as the Gay 9Os.

16. In order for one to achieve the desired results in this experiment, it is necessary that he work as fastly (fast) as possible.

17. Whoever inspected this radio should have put their identification number on the box.

18. The new model costs twice more than last year's model.

19. The purpose of the United Nations, broad (broadly) speaking, is to maintain peace and security and to encourage respect for human rights.

20. It is an accepted custom for one to say “excuse me” when he sneezed (sneezes).

21. Even though Miss Colombia lost the beauty contest, she was (is) still more prettier than the other girls in the pageant.

22. There have been little change in the patient's condition since he was (is) moved to the intensive care unit.

23. Although we are concerned with the problem of energy sources, we must not fail (in) recognizing the need for environmental protection.

24. Because of the movement of a glacier, the form (forming) of the Great Lakes was very slow.

25. Professor Baker recommended that we are (should be) present at the reception this afternoon in order to meet the representatives from the Fulbright Commission.
 

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I’ll try the 1st 5 for you. Hopefully someone will pick up the rest or if I’ve time I might look at the rest for you later:

1. The duties of the secretary are to take (*taking) *the minutes, mail *mailing *the correspondence, and call *calling *the members before meetings.

2. If biennials were planted this year, they *will *be would be likely to bloom next year and every two years thereafter.

3. The value of the dollar declines as the rate of inflation *raises rises.

4. Even if a member has *drank drunk too much the night before, the counselors of Alcoholic Anonymous will try to convince him or her to sober up and stop drinking again.

5. Anthropologists assert that many of the early American Plains Indians did not engage in planting crops but *to *hunt in hunting, living primarily on buffalo meat.
 

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2. If biennials were planted this year, they will be (would be) likely to bloom next year and every two years thereafter.
This is a tricky one. It should be 'would be'. The first clause does not say, 'if they are planted' or 'if they had been planted', then conditional upon whether they were planted, they would be in bloom next year


6. The neutron bomb provides the (capability) of a limited nuclear war in which buildings would be preserved, but people would be destroyed.
(Is this really so about a neutron bomb?)
7. The differential attractions of the sun and the moon have a direct effect (on) the rising and falling of the tides.

8.(only Despite) the pills which are available, many people still have trouble sleeping.

9. Before TV, the common man seldom had the opportunity to see and hear his leaders (- 0mit)express their views.
(They may have seen them address a rally in person, or on a newsreel in a cinema.)

10. If it receives enough rain at the proper time, hay will grow (as) quickly as grass.
What gives? Hay doesn't grow - it is mown grass which has dried out.!!

11. Psychology Today is interesting, informative, and (only is) easy to read.

12. Before she died, the daughter of Andrew Jackson (who lived in the family mansion) used to take tourists through her home.
The sentence is clumsy - try putting brackets around 'who lived in the family mansion'

13. It is essential that the temperature is not (not be) elevated to a point where the substance formed may become unstable and decompose into its constituent elements.
'Isn't' and 'not be' are possibiities, but 'not be' is preferable.

14. Two of the players from the Yankees had) been chosen to participate in the All Star game.

15. John Philip Sousa, whom) many people consider the greatest composer of marches, wrote his music during the era known as the Gay 9Os.

16. In order for one to achieve the desired results in this experiment, it is necessary that he work as fast) as possible.
'one' has been used, then it changes to 'he'. A way round this is to rephrase the second part as 'necessary to work as fast/quickly as possible'.

17. Whoever inspected this radio should have put their identification number on the box.
I see nothing wrong here.

18. The new model costs twice as much as last year's model.

19. The purpose of the United Nations, broadly) speaking, is to maintain peace and security and to encourage respect for human rights.

20. It is an accepted custom for one to say “excuse me” when one sneezes).
Some people may feel happy about saying "when he sneezes'. I don't.

21. Even though Miss Colombia lost the beauty contest, she (both 'is' and 'was' are possibilities, depending on when this statement is being made ) still (more-omit) prettier than the other girls in the pageant.

22. There has been little change in the patient's condition since he was moved to the intensive care unit.

23. Although we are concerned with the problem of energy sources, we must not fail (in) recognizing the need for environmental
protection.
Trying to preserve as much of the phraseology as possible, you could write 'fail in our recognition of' but this is a mouthful and a bit pedantic. Better to write, 'must not fail to recognize'. In the sense of a sentence carrying real meaning rather than the glib words that just come out of people's mouths at times, the sentence is saying, we must not fail, must not 'forget' that at some time, we ought to recognize and admit a need for environment protection. What I imagine is actually meant is that 'we must not fail to protect the environment '

24. Because of the movement of a glacier, the forming) of the Great Lakes was very slow.

25. Professor Baker recommended that we should be) present at the reception this afternoon in order to meet the representatives from the Fulbright Commission.
 
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1. The duties of the secretary are to take (taking) the minutes, mailing the correspondence, and calling the members before meetings.

2. If biennials were planted this year, they will be (would be) likely to bloom next year and every two years thereafter.

3. The value of the dollar declines as the rate of inflation raises (rises).

4. Even if a member has drank (drunk) too mich the night before, the counselors of Alcoholic Anonymous will try to convince him or her to sober up and stop drinking again.

5. Anthropologists assert that many of the early American Plains Indians did not engage in planting crops but to hunt (in hunting), living primarily on buffalo meat.
1. taking (taking the minutes, mailing the correspondence, and calling the members)
2. would be
3. rises
4. has drunk
5. in hunting

6. The neutron bomb provides the capable (capability) of a limited nuclear war in which buildings would be preserved, but people would be destroyed.

7. The differential attractions of the sun and the moon have a direct effect in (on) the rising and falling of the tides.

8. Despite of (only Despite) the pills which are available, many people still have trouble sleeping.

9. Before TV, the common man seldom never had the opportunity to see and hear his leaders-express their views.

10. If it receives enough rain at the proper time, hay will grow (as) quickly as grass.

11. Psychology Today is interesting, informative, and it is (only is) easy to read..
6. capability
7. on (have a direct effect on)
8. Despite the pills which are available....
9. Either seldom or never would be grammatically correct.
10. will grow as quickly as
11. Psychology Today is interesting, informative, and easy to read.

:)

12. Before she died, the daughter of Andrew Jackson who lives (lived) in the family mansion used to take tourists through her home.
You need to change the punctuation in that sentence. (Only lived can go with used to.)

13. It is essential that the temperature is not (not be) elevated to a point where the substance formed may become unstable and decompose into its constituent elements.

14. Two of the players from the Yankees has (had) been chosen to participate in the All Star game.

15. John Philip Sousa, who (whom) many people consider the greatest composer of marches, wrote his music during the era known as the Gay 9Os.

16. In order for one to achieve the desired results in this experiment, it is necessary that he work as fastly (fast) as possible.

17. Whoever inspected this radio should have put their identification number on the box.

18. The new model costs twice more than last year's model.
13. not be (It is essential that the temperature not be....)
14. had been
15. who
16. ...it is necessary to work as fast as possible
17. OK
18. The new model costs twice as much as last year's model.

19. The purpose of the United Nations, broad (broadly) speaking, is to maintain peace and security and to encourage respect for human rights.

20. It is an accepted custom for one to say “excuse me” when he sneezed (sneezes).

21. Even though Miss Colombia lost the beauty contest, she was (is) still more prettier than the other girls in the pageant.

22. There have been little change in the patient's condition since he was (is) moved to the intensive care unit.

23. Although we are concerned with the problem of energy sources, we must not fail (in) recognizing the need for environmental protection.

24. Because of the movement of a glacier, the form (forming) of the Great Lakes was very slow.

25. Professor Baker recommended that we are (should be) present at the reception this afternoon in order to meet the representatives from the Fulbright Commission.
19. broadly speaking
20. when one sneezes
21. prettier (not "more prettier") Also, "was" and "is" are both used depending on context.
22. There has been little change in the patient's condition since he was moved to the intensive care unit.
23. fail to recognize
24. forming
25. be or should be

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2. If biennials were planted this year, they will be (would be) likely to bloom next year and every two years thereafter. Not likely - biennials flower in their second year and then die./

9. Before TV, the common man seldom never had the opportunity to see and hear his leaders express their views. omit "the" in front of common man; ..."seldom had..."

10. If it receives enough rain at the proper time, hay will grow (as) quickly as grass. Hay is grass. Hay is grass that has been cut and dried.

11. Psychology Today is interesting and informative, and it is (only is) easy to read. omit "only is".

16. In order for one to achieve the desired results in this experiment, it is necessary that he work as fastly (fast) as possible. ...one works...


18. The new model costs twice more than last year's model. "twice as much"

20. It is an accepted custom for one to say “excuse me” when he sneezed (sneezes). "...one sneezes."

21. Even though Miss Colombia lost the beauty contest, she was (is) still more prettier than the other girls in the pageant. "more pretty" OR "prettier".

22. There has been little change in the patient's condition since he was (is) moved to the intensive care unit. was
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It is certainly true that a sentence can be grammatically correct but factually incorrect.

~R
 
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