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It's my first post here. I hope to improve my writing. Thanks for helping me check this essay. If it is possible, please give me some suggestions. I'd be very grateful.
Directions: For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying" If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way." You can cite examples to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
Actually, history abounds examples to prove this saying. The late CEO of Apple, Steve Jobs, is a case in point. He was so addicted to details that he could not stop pushing his staff to pursue perfection in design and production. It's due to his focus on small things that Apple made great success in the mobile field.
As college students, we should improve ourselves by doing the small things perfectly. Only when all small things are done well can we make a success.
Directions: For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying" If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way." You can cite examples to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
Doing Small things Can Make Success
There are few people have the ability to do the great things and be admired by the world. In fact, many people become successful by doing the small things. As the old saying goes, "If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way." It means that if we haven't got the opportunity to do the great things, we can gain success by doing the small things perfectly.Actually, history abounds examples to prove this saying. The late CEO of Apple, Steve Jobs, is a case in point. He was so addicted to details that he could not stop pushing his staff to pursue perfection in design and production. It's due to his focus on small things that Apple made great success in the mobile field.
As college students, we should improve ourselves by doing the small things perfectly. Only when all small things are done well can we make a success.
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I don't understand the text in blue. I also found the rest of your text obscure. I think you should pick a more straightforward (simpler) topic instead of this.
