[Essay] Holidays

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ABDULLAH MATER

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Who does not wait for them?Holidays give us a break from our routine and help us to refresh ourselves and go back to work with renewed energy.They are not only meant for enjoying but also for doing our hobbies and interests.

During holidays we can live our life as we want.There are no rules for getting up in the morning and going to school, coming back home, having lunch, playing for a short while,we manage our time according to our own wish; we play, visit places, do our hobbies and are relaxed.

I read many story books during my summer holidays and enjoy spending time with my parents. We go together for picnics and watch a lot of movies. I have a nice time during my holidays but I also keep some time aside for my friends. I chat with them and also play games with them but of course, on line.

I know, holidays are enjoyed more by those, who work hard. It is indeed true that life without holidays would become boring, making one lose all interest in work and studies,so all of us should go on holidays.
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Hello Abdullah, and welcome to the forum. :)
Who does not wait for them? Holidays give us a break from our routine and help us to refresh ourselves and go back to work with renewed energy.They are not only meant for enjoyment, [STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] but also [STRIKE]for doing[/STRIKE] to pursue our hobbies and interests.

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I read many story books during my summer holidays and enjoy spending time with my parents. We go together for picnics and watch a lot of movies. I have a nice time during my holidays, but I also keep some time aside for my friends. I chat with them and also play games with them but, of course, on line.

I know holidays are enjoyed more by those who work hard. It is indeed true that life without holidays would become boring, making one lose all interest in work and study. [STRIKE]ies, so all of us should go on[/STRIKE] Thus, holidays are important for everyone.
 
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