A Bollywood Movie, Mom

Gaya87 said:

Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long Summary
A teacher, Devki, [STRIKE]leading a[/STRIKE] lives happily [STRIKE]life[/STRIKE] with her family, but her life takes a drastic [STRIKE]change[/STRIKE] turn when her husband Anand goes out of the country and at that same time, her stepdaughter Arya is gang raped by her classmate Mohit and his associates. Devki, [STRIKE]along[/STRIKE] with the help of Inspector Mathew Francis, seeks legal [STRIKE]help[/STRIKE] retribution but fails miserably. [STRIKE]At that time Devki sought help of[/STRIKE] She turns to a private detective, Daya Shankar Kapoor, [STRIKE]which[/STRIKE] but that leads to a series of unfortunate events. Will Devaki be able to [STRIKE]avenge[/STRIKE] punish her daughter’s culprits?

Click to expand...

Gaya87 said:

Short Summary
A mother who avenges her daughter’s rape in her own unique way after failed by the legal system.

Click to expand...

teechar said:

See above.


I can't believe you're still making this perennial mistake of yours. :-? Besides, that sentence is terrible. Please rewrite it.

Click to expand...

Gaya87 said:

I'm sorry teechar. Please take a look at my revised summary.

Devki’s life is shattered when her stepdaughter is gang-raped by her classmate, Mohit, and his friends. Will Devki wait for the law to take its course? Or will she hunt down the perpetrators of the crime?

Click to expand...