rodgers white
Senior Member
- Joined
- Jan 17, 2016
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- China
- Current Location
- China
Hi there. Would you please proofread the following text? Any help would be appreciated.
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Since the Meteor strike, hunting near the valley was poor. So, hunting parties decided to leave a ten-kilometre swath of unhunted grounds around the valley for twelve months in the hope of speeding up the return of said wildlife. Hunting was much harder, but in the end, it would prove to be worth it.
Gan and Jingying soon set out towards their old home with about twenty volunteers, including Bailian, Gan’s runner during the evacuation. Bailian had never left the valley except for the time in the cave during the meteor strike. So she was eager for a chance to explore outside the valley even farther.
Bailian was from a farming family; her father had never put her to work on the farm itself but used her to run messages to and from her mother; when not running, she had taught herself to cultivate flowers and new varieties of vegetables and fruits. The running skills had, of course, developed from her job as a message carrier.
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Since the Meteor strike, hunting near the valley was poor. So, hunting parties decided to leave a ten-kilometre swath of unhunted grounds around the valley for twelve months in the hope of speeding up the return of said wildlife. Hunting was much harder, but in the end, it would prove to be worth it.
Gan and Jingying soon set out towards their old home with about twenty volunteers, including Bailian, Gan’s runner during the evacuation. Bailian had never left the valley except for the time in the cave during the meteor strike. So she was eager for a chance to explore outside the valley even farther.
Bailian was from a farming family; her father had never put her to work on the farm itself but used her to run messages to and from her mother; when not running, she had taught herself to cultivate flowers and new varieties of vegetables and fruits. The running skills had, of course, developed from her job as a message carrier.
