NewHopeR
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The existence of the hormone lowers the metabolism of TAG in which Y acid is rich, the result of which is that TAG doubles in blood .
Of course, the second which above refers to The existence of the hormone lowers the metabolism of TAG in which Y acid is rich. I'm not sure whether the usage of two whichs would make native English speakers understand it at the first sight.
And even if they get it crystal clear, using two whichs in a row would be somewhat boring. But how to edit and improve it?