A Bollywood Movie, Jab Harry met Sejal

Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long Summary
Harry is a tour guide in Europe who reluctantly helps a desperate but determined young woman named Sejal to retrace their steps in order to locate the engagement ring she lost during her holiday. During the process, Harry falls in love with Sejal, but does not reveal it to her as she is engaged to someone else. What happens then? Will Sejal feel the same for Harry during this short journey?

Short Summary
A new relationship develops when a tour guide meets a young woman who is already engaged and loses her engagement ring during a month-long holiday in Europe.

Gaya87 said:

Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long Summary
Harry is a tour guide in Europe who reluctantly helps a desperate but determined young woman named Sejal to retrace their steps in order to locate the engagement ring she lost during her holiday. During the process, Harry falls in love with Sejal, but does not tell her, as she is engaged to someone else. What happens then? Will Sejal feel the same for Harry during this short journey?

Short Summary
A new relationship develops when a tour guide meets a young woman who is already engaged and loses her engagement ring during a month-long holiday in Europe.

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I like it better with the change I made.