Talking about Yosemite nation park. Yosemite national park is a national park located

Yosemite national park is a national park located in Mariposa , Tuolumne, California, USA. It has 3.081 km2 area and toward the west of the slope of a mountain ranges Sierra Nevada. Yosemite has over 3 million traveler in each year. the majority of traveler only to visit in Yosemite Valley.
Yosemite is famous on the world for the beautiful granite, high waterfalls...

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Lê Thiên Hoàng said:

Yosemite national park is a national park located in Mariposa , Tuolumne, California, USA.

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This location doesn't make any sense. Usually it is "city, state, nation." There is some sort of hierarchy.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yosemite_National_Park

Checking Wikipedia, the park is located in Tuolumne, Mariposa and Madera counties in California.
You failed to mention one of the counties and made it look like Mariposa was a location within Tuolumne.

If you are going to name counties, you need to tell people they are counties.

All the words in "Yosemite National Park" should be capitalized. There is no reason to state that something called "Yosemite National Park" is a national park.