[Grammar] As per the GM instruction

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Dear All
As per the GM instruction any correspondence via mail kindly keep him also in loop
 

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Do you mean General Motors or your General Manager?

If the latter, use "the GM's instruction."
 

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Dear All
As per the GM's instruction, [STRIKE]any[/STRIKE] (all) correspondence should be via (e)mail. Please/Kindly also keep him [STRIKE]also[/STRIKE] in the loop.

I'm assuming that GM here stands for General Manager because of "him."
 

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I don't think OP means "all correspondence should be via e-mail". I think he means "a copy of all e-mail correspondence should be extended to him".
 

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I would say "sent" to him.
 

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How about 'please copy him in on all e-mail correspondence'?

Not a teacher.
 

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Please c.c. all emails to him.
 

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I think the dots after 'c's can be omitted, but I am not a teacher.
 
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