[Grammar] Improvement(s) and it reads odd

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patran

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Dear Teachers

Should I put improvementS in the following sentence? And, I think the sentence reads odd, but don't know how to improve. Please kindly advise.

US high yield well supported: benign improvement(s) employment and corporate earnings continue
to support the USA, the largest and most developed high-yield market in which we prefer
single-B debt securities to high-grade debt.


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Anthony the learner
 

bhaisahab

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Dear Teachers

Should I put improvementS in the following sentence? And, I think the sentence reads odd, but don't know how to improve. Please kindly advise.

US high yield well supported: benign improvement(s) employment and corporate earnings continue
to support the USA, the largest and most developed high-yield market in which we prefer
single-B debt securities to high-grade debt.


Regards

Anthony the learner

It makes very little sense. I can't improve it because it's not clear what you want to say.
 
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