vectra
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- Joined
- Jun 16, 2005
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Ukraine
- Current Location
- Ukraine
Hello,
Here are the lines from one of my students' work:
The biggest popularity Zapp’s games have among 15-18 age group, which consumes 37.5% of this games. Two next groups are 19-25 and 26-35 age groups. They buy 25% and 20% of Zapp’s games and consoles respectively. The most disinterested group is 36+ age group, which buys only 5% of Zapp’s games.
Never mind the mistakes, what is a better word choice instead of 'disinterested" in this context?
Thank you in advance.
Here are the lines from one of my students' work:
The biggest popularity Zapp’s games have among 15-18 age group, which consumes 37.5% of this games. Two next groups are 19-25 and 26-35 age groups. They buy 25% and 20% of Zapp’s games and consoles respectively. The most disinterested group is 36+ age group, which buys only 5% of Zapp’s games.
Never mind the mistakes, what is a better word choice instead of 'disinterested" in this context?
Thank you in advance.