[Resume] Grammar for describing my last position on my resume

Hulio943 · Jan 26, 2020

I described my last position in 4 points. One of the points is:

Created SQL queries for getting valuable statistical information.

Is the grammar ok here?

emsr2d2 · Jan 26, 2020

Change "for getting" to "to obtain". I probably wouldn't bother with "valuable". I don't think most people think you would gather statistical information if it wasn't worth it.

Note that you can write "okay" or "OK" but not "ok".

Yankee · Jan 26, 2020

emsr2d2 said:
Change "for getting" to "to obtain". I probably wouldn't bother with "valuable". I don't think most people think you would gather statistical information if it wasn't worth it.

Note that you can write "okay" or "OK" but not "ok".

Or just delete "getting".

Tdol · Jan 27, 2020

How about saying something factual about the queries, which might be more impressive to someone than the adjectives?

Created SQL queries to collect data on xxxx.

[Resume] Grammar for describing my last position on my resume

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