Hello mickel,this is a v.short poem
i hope you like it
:i feel sick sence you left me and went apart
every thing i have i gave you even my heart
faithfull
I think v. is supposed to mean 'very'.Hello mickel,
Would you please give me more explanation about "V short poem"?
Thanks in advance
I think v. is supposed to mean 'very'.
The poem means:
I feel sick since you left me and went away.
Everything I had, I gave to you, even my heart.
You use 'had' because if you've given everything you own to her, then you no longer 'have' it. You had it, now she has it.right v its mean very
but why had
Sorry for my curiousity, but I wonder why a native made such a mistake, plus he specialized in academic area. Are you really a native English, Mickel?
Any way, I enjoyed reading your very short poem.
You use 'had' because if you've given everything you own to her, then you no longer 'have' it. You had it, now she has it.
(You need to be careful of giving everything you have to women! - or men, as the case may be.) :-D
Hello Mickel,thank u
im a grateful to you
but i did not understand "you need...." are you mean"dont give any one every thing or what?:-D:lol:
Yes.thank u
im a grateful to you
but i did not understand "you need...." are you mean"dont give any one every thing or what?:-D:lol: