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The internet will never replace traditional coursebooks in schools. To what extend do you agree with this prediction?
In this contemporary age, internet is a virtually modern and present-day technology, despite it has been developed and accepted in major of cases. In my opinion and as regards, traditional course books still have their role in schools and school curriculum, we could be able to realize that internet will never replace conventional course books.
On the one hand, due to the further or higher antecedent of books; beside, long time they have been taught, there are verity kinds of evidence to show and demonstrate that books could be comprehensive and complete sources for teacher to put them in school curriculum. Moreover, most of the teachers have the experience of teach and work based on books and plainly they wont accept the replacing books with internet easily. Furthermore, this replacing required assign a high amount budget which this in itself needs an extra schematization and planning, that all of this procedures will required spending a lot of time; hence, that would not achieve swimmingly.
On the other hand, regards to the daily development of technology and the need of modern human to exert the internet, the need of schools and teachers of using the internet would be crucial and undeniable; in addition, some of invaluable references are ancient; hence, we can not attain and use them in schools. Therefore, it is required to use the digital versions instead of the original books and sources. Furthermore, todays students are acquainted and feel more familiar with internet; thus, they would be more interested in using the internet and even it might leading to better results in their grade.
In conclusion, the significance of internet in schools is undeniable and the dependence of teachers or students on internet is perspicuous; however, that is sensible that traditional course books are inseparable parts of schools.
Could you please give me some feedback about my essay and help me to make it better?
It contsists of 319 words.
The internet will never replace traditional coursebooks in schools. To what extend do you agree with this prediction?
In this contemporary age, internet is a virtually modern and present-day technology, despite it has been developed and accepted in major of cases. In my opinion and as regards, traditional course books still have their role in schools and school curriculum, we could be able to realize that internet will never replace conventional course books.
On the one hand, due to the further or higher antecedent of books; beside, long time they have been taught, there are verity kinds of evidence to show and demonstrate that books could be comprehensive and complete sources for teacher to put them in school curriculum. Moreover, most of the teachers have the experience of teach and work based on books and plainly they wont accept the replacing books with internet easily. Furthermore, this replacing required assign a high amount budget which this in itself needs an extra schematization and planning, that all of this procedures will required spending a lot of time; hence, that would not achieve swimmingly.
On the other hand, regards to the daily development of technology and the need of modern human to exert the internet, the need of schools and teachers of using the internet would be crucial and undeniable; in addition, some of invaluable references are ancient; hence, we can not attain and use them in schools. Therefore, it is required to use the digital versions instead of the original books and sources. Furthermore, todays students are acquainted and feel more familiar with internet; thus, they would be more interested in using the internet and even it might leading to better results in their grade.
In conclusion, the significance of internet in schools is undeniable and the dependence of teachers or students on internet is perspicuous; however, that is sensible that traditional course books are inseparable parts of schools.
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