[General] 10 Minutes left to be 8 am

[Muktha_Rushu]

Could you please correct the sentences below?

1. The courier will be at office at 8.00 am. Hurry up. It is only 10 minutes left to be 8.00 am.

2. Could you please confirm if I book today's ticket, what should be the return date? Should it be tomorrow or Friday? Or If I book for tomorrow, Will Friday be OK to return?

3. Don't drink water too fast. You will choke yourself.

Regards,
Muktha.

 

[emsr2d2]

Could you please correct the sentences below?

1. The courier will be at the office at 8.00 am. Hurry up. [STRIKE]It is[/STRIKE] There's only 10 minutes left/to go. [STRIKE]to be 8.00 am.[/STRIKE] (Or you could use "Hurry up. It's already ten to eight."

2. Could you please [STRIKE]confirm[/STRIKE] tell me, if I book [STRIKE]today's[/STRIKE] a ticket for today, what [STRIKE]should be[/STRIKE] the return date should/would be? Should/Would it be tomorrow or Friday? Or If I book for tomorrow, will it be OK to return Friday? [STRIKE]be OK to return?[/STRIKE]

3. Don't drink water too fast. You [STRIKE]will[/STRIKE] might choke. [STRIKE]yourself.[/STRIKE]

[STRIKE]Regards,[/STRIKE]
[STRIKE]Muktha[/STRIKE]

See above.