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    #1

    please help me to correct, thank you.

    1) Flyer distributor will only distribute one flyer to any individual in a particular group, to only one individual in pairs, or to individual. By doing that, it can safe cost.

    2) Each customer take three pictures/photogrpah for free. The pictures and be taken in group, individual or in pairs. Customer can mix them up.

    3) The dress is too long, so alteration is needed to prevent the bottom part of the dress from geting caught under the chair leg or getting caught on anything.

    4) The nail must be remove or else many people will catch their clothes on it.

    5) The nail on this table always catches people's clothes.

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    Re: please help me to correct, thank you.

    A flyer distributor will only distribute one flyer to any individual in a particular group, to only one individual in pairs a couple, or just to an individual. By doing that, it can safe save costs.

    2) Each customer can take three pictures/photogrpah photographs for free. The pictures and can be taken in by a group, an individual or in pairs a couple. Customers can mix them up. [Not sure what is meant by this last bit]

    3) The dress is too long, so alteration is needed to prevent the bottom part of the dress from getting caught under the chair leg or getting caught on anything anything, such as a chair leg.

    4) The nail must be removed or else many people will may catch their clothes on it.

    5) The nail on this table always catches people's clothes. [This is OK]


    Jeremy

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