Student or Learner
Could someone tell me if the use of "while" in the following sentence is correct?
- I am particularly keen on the opportunity to have early responsibility and to assist the training team while gaining knowledge of the retail banking industry.
I mean that the actions mentioned above (to have early responsibility, to assist the training team and to gain knowledge) are simultaneous.
Is there any better way to say it?
I hope it is understandable!
Many thanks in advance.
Thank you very much!!