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    Please re-phrase

    We aim to provide our clients with a customized range of services while buying, letting or selling real estate property. We do this by providing a broad exposure that allows a fast sale or letting of your property through effective targeted marketing of your property.
    We also handle other aspects of the property business such as valuations, sale or lease agreements by liaising with other professionals in the field in order to efficiently and effectively deliver to our clients.

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    Re: Please re-phrase

    Quote Originally Posted by Realcom View Post
    We aim to provide our clients with a customized range of services while buying, letting or selling real estate property. We do this by providing a broad exposure that allows a fast sale or letting of your property through effective targeted marketing of your property.
    We also handle other aspects of the property business such as valuations, sale or lease agreements by liaising with other professionals in the field in order to efficiently and effectively deliver to our clients.
    As the moderators point out, we are here to help, not to do the work for you!!!

    Perhaps you would like to post your own attempt at re-phrasing the paragraph, then we can comment/correct as necessary.

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