Delete words in bracketsHello,
I'm writing my motivation letter and I am a little uncertain about some sentences. Not sure are my sentence structures correct and do I use commas correctly.
Here are the sentences:
""I would not consider myself (as) a person with highly technical ability but with the help of usability know-how, high technology applications it can be improved."
"My main/prime interest is usability study; I like its humane nature and the fact that usability really makes a lot of difference for the end-users."
"Thus I believe that if I do my master’s thesis in coordination with you, it will benefit both sides."
So are these sentences written correctly?
Thanks in advance.
Student or Learner