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    I shall add this software to my wapsite

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    1: ''Yesterday it was pouring and the people who squandered their money on buying the firworks to let off at the night of fate, looked dejected.'' OR ''Yesterday it was pouring and the people who squandered their money on buying the firworks to let off on the night of fate, looked dejected.''?

    2: "I shall add this software to my wapsite for visitors to download it." OR "I shall put this software on my wapsite for visitors to download it."?

    Thanks in advance!

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    Re: I shall add this software to my wapsite

    Quote Originally Posted by twilit1988 View Post
    My respected teacher

    1: ''Yesterday it was pouring and the people who squandered their money on buying the firworks to let off at the night of fate, looked dejected.'' OR ''Yesterday it was pouring and the people who squandered their money on buying the firworks to let off on the night of fate, looked dejected.''?

    2: "I shall add this software to my wapsite for visitors to download it." OR "I shall put this software on my wapsite for visitors to download it."?

    Thanks in advance!
    Yesterday it was pouring, and the people who wasted their money on fireworks to set off on the Night of Fate looked dejected.

    1. What is "the night of fate"? Will your reader know what this is?
    2. Don't separate the subject from the noun with a comma.

    I shall add this software to my Web site for visitors to download.
    1. You can either add it or put it - either is fine.
    2. Very few speakers use "I shall" any longer. You'll almost never hear it in the US, and my UK friends say it's not even very common in there these days.
    3. I assume wapsite was Web site?

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