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    Can anyone help me with this paragraph ?.

    Can anyone help me with this paragraph ?. I am not sure if it is comprehensive . Thank you

    .....People who watched the ABC channel had voted for Reagan was the result more than 70% when actually the contents in the news toward Regan were rather negative but the people were encouraged and attracted attention by Jennings’s performance subtly. Therefore, the salesmen should be considered the innovators as they play an important role in bringing new ideas and pulling people also being an important communicator while the people who voted for Reagan should be Early Acceptors because they are respectable people.....

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    Re: Can anyone help me with this paragraph ?.

    Did you use an online translator for that?

    I'm sorry, but it's impossible to understand what you mean.

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