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    Please check my grammar and style..a small beautiful dream

    I saw a very beautiful dream last night. God asked me do you really love your sweetheart. I replied, yes I truly do. He again asked is she means everything to you. I said instantly yes of course! Then he said what if I give her all your happiness and luxury of your life, which is meant for you. I paused for a moment and said yes but on one condition. God seen perplexed for a moment and said, what’s the condition? I said yes only on one condition, give all her worries and sadness to me.

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    Exclamation Re: Please check my grammar and style..a small beautiful dream

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    I saw a very sweet (beautiful) dream last night. God appeared bfore me and asked, "Do you really love your sweetheart." I replied, yes I truly do. He again asked if (is) she means everything to me (you). I said instantly, yes of course! Then He said, "What if I take away all (your) happiness and luxury of (your) life, which are (is) meant for you and give those to her." I paused for a moment and said, yes, You can do that but on one condition. God seems to be (seen) perplexed for a moment and said, "What’s the condition?" I said, "The (yes only on one) condition is, give all her worries and sadness to me."
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    Re: Please check my grammar and style..a small beautiful dream

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    Does using sweet or beatiful in the first sentence make differnce?

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    Exclamation Re: Please check my grammar and style..a small beautiful dream

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Does using sweet or beatiful in the first sentence make differnce?
    Both are adjectives and can be used before dream to mean the same. However, in my openion, Sweet dream sounds good.

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