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    proper writing

    which is proper English:-

    based on (ADPC) owning fair quantity of shares
    or
    based upon (ADPC) owning fair quantity of shares



    also, which is proper English:-

    ATHEER is looking forward to cooperate with (ADPC) to invest, to develop, and to manage the warehousing business

    or

    ATHEER is looking forward to cooperate with (ADPC) to invest, develop, and manage the warehousing business

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    Re: proper writing

    Quote Originally Posted by Zaid View Post
    which is proper English:-

    based on (ADPC) owning fair quantity of shares
    or
    based upon (ADPC) owning fair quantity of shares

    Both are fine.


    also, which is proper English:-

    ATHEER is looking forward to cooperating with (ADPC) to invest, to develop, and to manage the warehousing business

    or

    ATHEER is looking forward to cooperating with (ADPC) to invest, develop, and manage the warehousing business.
    both are fine once you correct with gerund.

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