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    please help for two sentences

    Please find attached LC amendment for revised terms from at sight to 45 days sight.

    Our management agreed to share half LC opening charge with your company. We shall charge you back for USD xxx.


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    Smile Re: please help for two sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Please find attached LC amendment for revised terms from at sight to 45 days sight.

    Our management agreed to share half LC opening charge with your company. We shall charge you back for USD xxx.
    terms from at sight to 45 days sight - It's not clear to me what this means, but I'll rewrite the sentence just the same.

    Please, find attached the LC amendment for the revised terms.

    It somehow seems odd to continue with the rest. What does "from at sight to 45 days sight" mean? With an idea of that this refers to, I should be able to know if it should be changed or left as it is.

    Our management agreed to share half of the LC opening charge with your company. We shall charge you back for USD xxx


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    Exclamation Re: please help for two sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Please find attached the LC amendment for revised terms changed from at sight to 45 days sight.

    Our management agreed to share half the cost of LC opening charge with your company. We shall charge you back for USD xxx.
    I hope this meets your intention.

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