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    Please correct my text

    We unable help negotation with customer ship the goods by sea instead of air if the goods is ready by end August. You shall noticed the time schedule requested from customer beforehand. Please try to pull in your production to reduce the airship quantity to save the freight.


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    Re: Please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    We unable help negotation with customer ship the goods by sea instead of air if the goods is ready by end August. You shall noticed the time schedule requested from customer beforehand. Please try to pull in your production to reduce the airship quantity to save the freight.
    If the goods are not ready by the end of August, we are unable to help with negotiating the shipment of this customer's goods by sea instead of by air. You should have made certain that you knew the time schedule as indicated by the customer. Please improve your schedule so that the production is completed in time to reduce the air shipping quantity in order to save on freight costs.

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