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    • Join Date: Sep 2008
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    #1

    Please help

    Hi Teachers,

    Please correct me on below sentence.


    Thanks for you to visit us.

    Attached here is our company location map with the company address. The travel time from your hotel to our company approximately 2 hours+, because our company is located at another state in Malaysia.


    Best Regards,
    waiwai

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    • Join Date: Jul 2009
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    #2

    Re: Please help

    In my opinion,

    Thank you for your visit,

    Our company location map and the company address are attached here. The travel time from your hotel to our company are approximately 2 hours+, because our company is located in another state in Malaysia.

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    #3

    Re: Please help

    Quote Originally Posted by ngathuy View Post
    In my opinion,

    Thank you for your visit,

    Our company location map and the company address are attached here. The travel time from your hotel to our company is approximately 2 hours+, because our company is located in another state in Malaysia.
    Almost perfect, replace 'are' with 'is'.

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