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    #1

    are these sentence correct

    1)The reason why i send this mail is to request for the breakdown payment history for each of the semester i spent in your college.

    2) The reason why i send this email is to request for the payment history by/according to each semester i spent in your college.

    3) The reason why i send this email is to request for the itemized payment history by each semester.


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    Smile Re: are these sentence correct

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1)The reason why i send this mail is to request for the breakdown payment history for each of the semester i spent in your college.

    2) The reason why i send this email is to request for the payment history by/according to each semester i spent in your college.

    3) The reason why i send this email is to request for the itemized payment history by each semester.
    I would rephrase what you want to say like this:

    I'm sending this email to request an itemized payment history for each semester.

    I would consider it better, however, to leave out "I'm sending this email" and simply make your request.

    Could you, please, send me an itemized payment history for each semester?

    More polite::

    I would appreciate it if you could send me an itemized payment history for each semester.


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