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    #1

    Update yourself on the latest games earlier than anybody else.

    Hello.

    Update yourself on the latest games earlier than anybody else.
    Is this sentence good?

    Thank you.


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    #2

    Smile Re: Update yourself on the latest games earlier than anybody else.

    Quote Originally Posted by Daruma View Post
    Hello.

    Update yourself on the latest games earlier than anybody else.
    Is this sentence good?

    Thank you.
    It's correct, but there's something about it that doesn't sound exactly natural to me. It's hard to be more specific.

    I would say it like this: Update yourself on the latest games sooner than anyone else.




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    Re: Update yourself on the latest games earlier than anybody else.

    Update yourself on the latest games sooner than anyone else.

    Can you say the same thing without using the word "update"?


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    Re: Update yourself on the latest games earlier than anybody else.

    Quote Originally Posted by Daruma View Post
    Update yourself on the latest games sooner than anyone else.

    Can you say the same thing without using the word "update"?
    Here's a way to say it without using "update".

    Find out about the latest games sooner than anyone else.

    update - get the latest information or news
    find out - get information, in general

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