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2006-present XX, Nanjing, Jiangsu
Candidate for BSc in Animal Science, degree expected in June 2010
GPA: 3.64(87/100), ranked among top 10% of major
Scholarship & Awards
2008-2009 Second-Class Scholarship for MeritStudents
2008-2009 Zhengda Corporation Scholarship,Department of Animal Science
2008-2009 Scholarship for Individual Performance
2008-2009 Excellent Student Cadre, Department of Animal Science
2007-2008 First-Class Scholarship for Merit Students
October 2007 Second Award in English Dubbing Contest
Chinese: native speaker
English: fluent user
French: basic knowledge
Frequent user of Microsoft Office, Visual Basic
March 2009-April 2009 Academic internship at school farm. Acquired deeper understanding of technology courses.
May 2008-June 2009 Student Research Training program in university tutored : Professor Han Zhaoyu
Paid visits to Chunhua ranch, did practical work with senior students at the laboratory, inquired basic materials on research, started Student Research Training(SRT) program.
June 2008 - August 2008
did the following SRT work on heat-stressed dairy cows at Chunhua ranch. Learned acquired knowledge about raising cows
July 2008 - March 2009
did analysis work at the laboratory on The Effects of MetaStarm on Performances and Indexes of Dairy Cattle in Heat Stress. Understood the process of perform a research, and the importance to work on a team.
April 2009 - June 2009
finished the program report
Private tutor taught chemistry to a middle school student in Grade 3, assistant her for high school entrance examination. Improved the oral impression.
Volunteer teacher at Cang bomen Primary School. Learned how to be patient and open-minded.
IELTS：Overall band score 7
College English Test Band 6
National computer Rank Certificate
Mandarin proficiency test
College English Test Band 4
organize class activities as a class president
Such as investigation on honesty issues, discussions on how to improve the competitive advantages university students have, arranging hiking, dinning and so on.
Take part in the volunteer work to protect Luehdorfia puziloi. Learned the importance of nature protecting.
A member of The Company- Planning Club, helped organize activities.
A member of basketball team
A member of tae kwon do club
A member of Red Cross
Singing, literature, playing badminton, hiking, travel
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