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  1. new2grammar's Avatar
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    Samll introduction letter please check

    We would like to take this opportunity to introduce our ad agency, xyz, an INS accredited agency. We are gateway for all the communication needs, we provide cost effective & result oriented efficient solutions. Enclosed herewith are two CDs agency profile & TVC commercials created by us for your reference.
    Awaiting your positive reply

    Regards,

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    Re: Samll introduction letter please check

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    We would like to take this opportunity to introduce our ad agency, xyz, an INS accredited agency. We are a gateway for all your communication needs; we provide cost effective and result oriented efficient solutions. Enclosed herewith are two CDs – agency profile & TVC commercials created by us for your reference.
    Awaiting your positive reply (I'm not keen on this)
    We are ready to answer any questions you may have.

    Regards,
    Almost perfect.
    It depends on how friendly/intrusive you want to be:
    We are a gateway for all communication needs ... Objective
    We are the gateway for all your communication needs ... This is a more modern, trendy way of saying it. You are asserting that you are the right company for them.
    Having said that, I don't like the ending, "Awaiting your positive reply"
    You'll have to decide which style works best in India.

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