I will take on the first paragraph. (Comments in blue.)
First of all, my staff and I would like to welcome all of you to Michael Community College. My name is Anna Joseph. I am Assistant School Director. We hope you had a terrific summer and are excited about the start of fall classes. Most importanly, we are pleased that you have chosen to come to Michael Community College. I have a few things to discuss, but today I will talk about only three things: instructors, getting help when needed, and textbooks.
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