leave cancellation letter

[francycham]

Please correct the below letter:

Sir,

I am scheduled to take my vacation in the month of October starting from 15/10/2009 till 25/10/2009. But due to some personal reasons, I wish to cancel it and re-apply in the month of January 2010.
Hope you would consider my request favourably.

Faithfully,

 

[bhaisahab]

Please correct the below letter:

Sir,

I am scheduled to take my vacation in the month of October starting from 15/10/2009 till 25/10/2009. But due to some personal reasons, I wish to cancel it and re-apply in the month of January 2010.
Hope you would consider my request favourably.

Faithfully,

Dear Sir,

I am scheduled to take my vacation in the month of October, from 15/10/2009 to 25/10/2009. However, due to personal reasons, I wish to cancel it and re-apply in the month of January 2010.
I hope you will consider my request favourably.

Yours faithfully,

Bhai.