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    We at Popley do not believe in just giving offers to attract your attention, but to give you the best possible offer available in the market, which is the best value for money to nurture our pure relationship. So, keeping with the same tradition, with the deep sense of gratitude for your patronage, we are here at it again with a very exclusive offer for you. In this time of recession when every other price is shooting upwards, we offer you Gold at Gold price. Do not rub your eyes you read it right, pay GOLD PRICE ONLY. Obviously the best offer comes with the tag of limited period. So do we need to say hurry up!

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    Exclamation Re: Kindly check content for the grammar

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    We at Popley do not just believe in giving offers to attract your attention, but (to) provide/give you the best possible offer available in the market, that gets you (which is) the best value for money and at the same time (to) nurtures our pure relationship. So, in keeping with the same tradition based on (with the) a deep sense of gratitude for your patronage, we are here at it again with a very exclusive offer for you. In this time of recession when every other price is shooting upwards, we offer you Gold at Gold price. Do not rub your eyes, you read it rightly, and pay GOLD PRICE ONLY. Obviously the best offer comes with the tag of limited period. So do we need to say hurry up!
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    Last edited by sarat_106; 27-Aug-2009 at 03:43.

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