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    Are these sentences correct - inspection arrangement

    Please help accompany with the customer to perform the online inspection on 01 Sept.

    What is the schedule for 1516 pcs AR2345? Please provide us your mass production start date as this is required/needed for the online inspection.


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    Re: Are these sentences correct - inspection arrangement

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Please help accompany with the customer to perform the online inspection on 01 Sept.

    What is the schedule for 1516 pcs AR2345? Please provide us your mass production start date as this is required/needed for the online inspection.

    Please help accompany with the customer to perform the online inspection on 01 Sept. < It's not clear what you mean by "accompany with the customer". I can only tell you that it is incorrect.

    What is the schedule for the 1,516 pcs of AR2345? Please provide us your mass production start date as this is required/needed for the online inspection. < You can use either "needed" or "required" here.

    I would use "with" in the phrase "provide us" - "provide us with", but it's not absolutely necessary.

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    Exclamation Re: Are these sentences correct - inspection arrangement

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Please (help) accompany and assist (with) the customer to perform the online inspection on 01 Sept.

    What is the schedule for 1516 pcs AR2345? Please provide us with the date of starting your mass production as this is required /needed for the online inspection.
    PROESL has made a couple of good suggestions. I have modified your text incorporating his suggestions. Delete words in brackets.

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