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    plesae correct this

    In spite of several reminders, the traffic fine for Reg. 332974 has not been settled by you yet! As a result, the end user is not able to obtain the accident police report as of now. Since the vehicle is not drivable condition, it is lying idle with the customer and hence, the rental charges not chargeable to the end user.

    Therefore, you will be liable to pay QR. 120/- per day from the date of my first notification sent to your office requesting to settle the fine.

    Kindly accept the above and send us the confirmation at the earliest in order to proceed charging the said amount.


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    Re: plesae correct this

    Since this is presumably a legal document, correct phrasing is important.

    In the context that can be gathered. "end user" is an odd term. What do you mean by "end user"?

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    Re: plesae correct this

    Say:
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    Since the vehicle is not drivable condition, it is sitting idle.

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